Sunday, August 3, 2008

Maybe!

The dawn arrived in vain
It will crawl away too
No one entered the sight

Barren eyes will empathize


Even today tears couldn't find a way
Even today eyes were not moist
The night will pass away too

Maybe someday he would be able to say how she made him feel.
Maybe someday he would be able to say how he always wanted her.
Maybe someday he would be able to say how many times he died inside himself.
Maybe someday he would be able to say every word which he killed inside.
Maybe someday she would get to know,
Maybe someday he would be able to say ...

He loved her because she loved him.
But he couldn't love her because she loved him.

Why it always have to be him?
That's always left out to burn.
Still, he never learns.

I hope he realizes its time to accept somethings are not made for him.
To feel.
To live.

Only few have passed till now.
I am scared of every other coming night till eternity.

--

If only...
I prefer silence.

15 comments:

rainboy said...

//I hope he realizes its time to accept somethings are not made for him.//

with time he will.....




happy friendship day man

pj said...

lovely poem!:)

ceedy said...

do options to understand and realize...

ek to tirth yatra

ya phir ganga nahale

Gunjan Aylawadi said...

such is life!

kyamaloom said...

What is "such" and what is "life"?

Anonymous said...

Take Care...

Love
S.

gypsy said...

"Why it always have to be him?
That's always left out to burn.
Still, he never learns."

It is not him alone who is left out...and again it isn't him alone who doesn't learn!!!


Secondly, you ca always 'feel' things even if not live, least feelings aren't bounded!!!

Anonymous said...

I wish it was not 'him' always. But then.. what can i say!

hope 'he' learns with time..just hoping!

lov..

(belated) frenship day Sutta!

Solitaire said...

Hope. That's what keeps us alive and kicking.

rantravereflect/ jane said...

yeah, i bond with that line
"I hope he realizes its time to accept somethings are not made for him."
Of alte, i've come to realise that some things are not made for me..
my favorite dreams n my self-assumptions about myself..

but i'd styll feel n i'd styll live.. :)

unlike the guy in the poem..

"If only...
I prefer silence."
i do prefer silence; it is peaceful n painless..
then again, i don't mind noise of one kind--> music.. :)

love n hugs:)
belated happy friendship day :)

p.s:one of these days, can ya write in a happy poem..
just for me, i wanna see that streak of happiness that mars and darkens your otherwise well-liked-moroseness :p

rantravereflect/ jane said...

i dunno where my comment went :(
well what i was rying to say is that this line means a lot to me..
"I hope he realizes its time to accept somethings are not made for him."
cos i've realosed that there are tons of things that are not made for me..
some of ma self-assumptions abt my life,some of my dreams, some of the peope i love so darn too much..

but i still FEEL and i still LIVE..
:)

n i prefer silence- it is healing..but i'd equall prefer noise of one kind- music :)

one of these days, write a happy poem for me.. :)
i jus wanna see that happy streak that so badly mars and darkens your otherwise happily morose self ;);)
puhleeese PUKE some happiness :)

joie de vivre said...

i prefer silence!

Prakhar said...

"He loved her because she loved him.
But he couldn't love her because she loved him."

true true true...nice one man!

Matangi Mawley said...

loved it..

HootieBird said...

as each tear ,slides down my face

,burning with the moisture of each drop ,

Are you Listening ,can you hear me

I am so scared ,lost ,My Heart wants to ,Tears falling

been gone to long