Chilly winter
Moonless night
Unceasing Wind
Alien city
Long never ending road
Dim street lights
A herd of blissful clans
A gloomy soul
Hands weakened
Trembled Knees
Steps faltered
Numb beyond crux
Haunted memories
Lost paradise
A walk down the boulevard of crushed dreams!
- Flip -
Four walls
A broken mirror
Carton of burning cigarettes
Pitch Dark
Choked silence
Teary pillows
Eternal gawk
Lost Hope
Murdered love
Frozen blood
Ashes all over
Anxiety and Fear
Dead eyes
Eons of tears
Sea to cry!
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That was the 'longest' night of my life!
22 comments:
did u forgot to mention no food or a ...what was that pasta or something......:P
on a serious note when I reached FLIP i will get to read a 'full of love', 'good' side now, but then...
so lets make it more grim...
Carton of burning cigarettes
Two-three empty bottles
teary pillows
shattered glass on the ground
Frozen blood
maddening emotions
bORED?
oh yea, me too...
Melancholic!
U survived it..smile now :)
wat was wrong?
@ Gunj
Ah! Nothing just a kickass heartbreak! :)
wht I am commentin' on is wht u wrote abt urself in the profile area...
Is it that u think u're too unlike most of us or is it a trick to actually amuse others by uniquely describing urself??
answer me..
wht I am commentin' on is wht u wrote abt urself in the profile area...
Is it that u think u're too unlike most of us or is it a trick to actually amuse others by uniquely describing urself??
answer me..
Is it that u think u're too unlike most of us or is it a trick to actually amuse others by uniquely describing urself??
Well, if you were amused then take it that way, or else the other. ;)
Whichever suits you, coz to be honest it doesn't really matters to me!
if that was the longest nite in ur life, I hope tonight will be one of the shortest and the most beautiful nites in ur life.
:) keep smiling...
btw I love this song.
Keshi.
i cant comment on ur latest post since uve deactivated the comments option there...
neways i only want to say 'hang in there! this too shall pass!!'
take care
i really liked the latest post .. cant comment there :-|
ahh.. yah i knw... i really dint mean i like that state or nething :-|
but i can actually right now identify with that one :)
well... cut the ciggies.. and u r talkin of me :)
chalo cheer up..write!
And the longest day is over!
cme out of it
breath sme fresh air
look up at the sky
breath the fragrance of the spring flowers
live not because u have to
dnt see beauty, when u feel the beauty
let it seep in..
it is over.. and u r better understanding that...than burning yourself like this.
----well after this, if u say this is fiction! I will kill u!
time to change from the black to the greys! because white is so extreme ;)
cme on now smile!
@ Veens
Okayz! That seemed like a rule or sumfin. :P
But yep thats true as well. Also, just FYI I don't write fiction. :)
hey
dat was a bit tooooooooo dark though i ryt de same kinda thingz
but i lyked it anyway a gud one
dark wrdz represent a dark soul wid a stoned heart living in harsh reality wid a frozen nerves no blood i noe i am in mood cant help it
anyway a gud one
keep goin
Ver well described.. we al go thru such nights, days, times, moments ! the fact that after that night..inspite of being hurt, angry, pained and all those things, u were brave enuff to embrace the day..that is what matters :)
gr8.. i cme back.. and i dnt see u no where :))
it is not rule-maker... but i did lov it .. if u cme back out of this gloom of yurs :))
cme on now :))
heyaa
Some powerful words here :)
btw uv been tagged
cheers
Now honestly, what is your obsession with broken walls, broken mirrors, 'dead eyes', dark, lonely pasages, 'crushed dreams', yaddy-yadda... Stop acting like a child who has just broken his toy, and go write something strong and passionate--a piece which is NOT preoccupied with intense feelings of melancholy..
Trust me, your life as of now, is an exact replica of mine.. but honey, life still goes on... there are more important things in the world we ought to face than some frivilous heart breaks... Like, tsunamis, for example.. world politics for another... poverty, race.. ahem.. I think we went a litte too far... :P
Now, you be strong.. smile.. you have biggger, happier things to look forward to, so don't you dare smoke too much on those cigarettes!
I felt like I read me!
btw,
is this a song?
@ Elusive
NO, Its NOT!
I liked the term 'kickass heartbreak'!
u are strong and brave, aren't u?
Take care!
and yes...HUGS!
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