Tuesday, March 11, 2008

Reminds Me oF YOU!

Wind in my alley
Dust in my eyes
Fall of the eternal lonely dusk
Reminds me of you!

Rust in my nerves
Ailing of the soul
Deep inner pores
Reminds me of you!

City streets that don't weep with me anymore
Barren eyes that don't dream anymore
Sued lips that don't speak anymore
Reminds me of you!

Quiet days that don't sound like before
Broken mirrors that don't image me anymore
Sunshine that don't falls on my shore
Reminds me of you!

Fragrance of your aura
Forever undying smile
Crystal utopia in the eyes
Reminds me of you!

Handy walks
Sweet mushy talks
Beautiful silence between two
Reminds me of you!

Old words written
Dreams drawn in-sync
Laughter shared n on
Reminds me of you!

Melodies that don't sound like before
Sweet pain that don't tastes anymore
A tree that never grows old
Reminds me of you!

Murdered love
Against the blue skies
Stands with head held high
Reminds me of you!

Songs I've written
Stories I've told
Memories twisting in fold
Reminds me of you!

Wish you would've stayed FOREVER!

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16 comments:

gypsy said...

very beautiful...

exhibitin your dark moments..:)

i like it...

My fav lines--"Barren eyes that don't dream anymore
Sued lips that don't speak anymore
Reminds me of you"

I love Lucy said...

What an incredibly dark realm this is!
Thoroughly enjoyed the read though.

ceedy said...

wow....a very profound image of lost love - you have a special gift - try channelizing this love towards some needy people - it will not totally not remind you ....but will help heal the soul a bit

Anonymous said...

thats speechless and spellbounding....wont say more for obvious reasons!!!

Mez said...

Masterpiece!!

Let teh creative juices flow n lend me some talent to channelise my mind into sumtin when i am not drunk but still am.

Gunjan Aylawadi said...

dat was awesome!!
uve got sme real talent!

gypsy said...

U have been tagged....

Pri said...

simply amazing!!

loved it :)

How do we know said...

Surprise! Surprise! You actually write well!

Solitaire said...

What sad associations..:(

freesherry said...

a sudden laugh
a secret smile
reminds me of u

a distant murmur
a rolling tear
reminds me of u

a melody from the past
a word thrown about fast
reminds me of u

every breath i take
every pain in my heart
every sleepless night
every lonely fight
reminds me of u..

Matangi Mawley said...

Broken mirrors that don't image me anymore..

Melodies that don't sound like before..

beautiful!

Blindwreck said...

strikes similar cords!! well...
good one!

- blind

p.s. kickass song on the page!

manisha said...

soaringly lyrical....lovingly acute

Mavron said...

ummm..do u need words here?..dude i am speechless.

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